Drama at Camp (Draft #2)-Draft #3 final

Have you ever been to Camp? I have and a lot of drama awoke my trip. We were headed towards Ensenada, Mexico into a camp area called Las Canadas. Every one so relieved that we were at camp. I smelled something fishy as soon as my cousin said "Lets go into the pool!" Are you serious he has got to be kidding, I mean the pool seems as if it were closed. Na! I don't think they closed it maybe Tony wasn't joking around. I had so many thoughts running through my head that it was like a rocket that had just took off.

"I don't think we should take a risk and go in the pool, I mean you know you don't know how to swim." I snotted almost laughing. Then he quickly ran to his mom and stared at me with those evil eyes. It was sunset and we had to get ready for sleep. I was to tired to even move when... Bam. Slam. Bum. I fell into the tent with all the Luggage in there. Ouch! ugh. Thats it I'm gonna go to sleep right now. Good night. Night.

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"Ready!" my sisters screamed by the tent.

"No! Leave me alone." I cried.

"You have to get up." my mom yelled.

"Do I have to get ready for going into the pool or not." I said. Wait of course I really must go into the pool. I'll be ready! I cheered. I got into my swim suit.

Waiting in line can be boring but I had to do it. Because if I didn't there was no other way in. Boring. The line was filled in and being pushed around by kids. We got in after like 7 minutes. "Remember Tony you need to stick with me!" I barked running to the slides. He followed but wasn't to glad about the fact that he had to stick with me.

Some minutes (Like 27) passed and I lost Track of where Tony had told me he would go. Oh no where did he go! I thought searching under water and up to the slides. "There he is, Tony! Tony! Careful, try to hold your breath I'll be there in a sec. okay!" I screamed really loud Staring at him and swimming as fast as I could. blah. blar. blurb. I could hear him drowning. I got him and told him are you okay... I could see you choking.

" I'm fine but maybe we should (cough) go back to the tent.

"Uh, no I forgot to tell you we have to go to that cabin that we just got over there." I told him in a quiet soft stroking voice. We got up and to the mountain/hill in the cabin and I jerked " Hey you know ever since we got here the pool has been our drama. Funny ha?"

The end of my memoir, Claudia Alexandra Martinez