3 leads for my memoir post #3

My first beginnning:

Have you ever been to Camp? I have and alot of drama awoke my trip. We were headed torwards Ensenada, Mexico into a camp area called Las Canadas. Every one so reliefed that we were at camp. I smelled something fishy as soon as my cousin said "Lets go into the pool!" Are you serious he has got to be kidding, I mean the pool seems as if it were closed. Nah! I don't think they closed it maybe Tony wasn't joking around. I had so many thoughts running through my head that it was like a rocket that had just took off.

My second beginning:
"Dad, can I go into the pool?" Again as I told him he stared at me and said"of course you can't." The words were clearly in my mind like an owl who could hoot for anything he heard, even the wind. Then my situation became even more bad ... When my cousin came up to me and said that they were closing the pool, and it was MY FAULT!!! Can you believe that? I know how rude. As I was thinking my mom came up to me and it felt like she had thrown my thought away. My mom and dad said it was getting late and so I had to go to sleep.